Applies to: Agencies writing their website, offer, ads or outreach for a niche
How should I write my agency website and offer so business owners buy?
Sell the outcome, not the technology. Business owners want sales, leads and appointments. If you sell a piece of technology, they either do not understand it or do not have time to set it up. They want to hire someone who just does it for them.
Call out your target audience at the top of the page (for example: attention plumbers) and lead with the result you deliver, for example: we help plumbers get more service appointments on autopilot, or start booking more work. Make the outcome specific enough that the visitor can picture it. For a gym, get the dream body is too vague, while see your abs for the first time is something a visitor can picture. Do not rely on the visitor's imagination, and avoid filler buzzwords such as imaginative business solutions.
Keep tech talk off the main page. A home service owner cares about leads, appointments and sales, not CRM pipelines, lead capture forms or missed call text back. Below the headline, explain how you deliver the outcome in very simple terms, for example a 24/7 AI that answers calls and books appointments, plus automatic follow ups, annual service reminders and database reactivation.
A visitor should understand within two seconds what you do and who it is for, so put the main word of your offer front and center. Keep the offer simple: price, pain points, the solution and the outcome. Use a bright button color so a button looks like a button, and keep your ads and your landing page congruent.
Selling an outcome such as more booked service appointments also lets you charge much more than someone who just sells a CRM, because one is a piece of software and the other is money in the bank.
If you joined the 5 Day Challenge, the Day 2 and Day 3 recordings cover building your offer: pricing, pain points, solution and outcome.